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How а career technical communication ruined me as a letter writer
BEFORE:
[Avoid
I wanted to thank you so much for the
new angora sweater you
birthday! I can't believe you remembered that blue 15 my absolute favorite Color (especially that
gorgeous shade of robin's egg blue, which reminds me of the summers I spent with you in the
country, all those years ago)!
think of you whenever I wear И. I really appreciate the time and
effort you took to pick this
out
it so nicely, and send it to me.
With lots of love, your niece,
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Suzann
add anything to the
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meaning.
knows who
are.
AFTER:
Dear Aunt Bee,
Thank you for the sweater. It is:
Warm
Soft
Blue
I think of you when I wear the sweater. I appreciate your kindness.
Sincerely,
Suzanne